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Warm at Heart by ~Dragonspear:iconDragonspear:

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Freezing from the cold,
my shivering is erratic and uncontrolled.
I can't quite focus on anything but,

You.

As I shrug off the icicles and frost,
without you by my side I'm lost.
In the frozen wind of despair,
I miss running my hands through your hair.
I love the light from the moon,
as it glances off your blue eyes stare.

So many things that are you,
so many things I love about you,
so many sayings to misconstrue,
everything so cliche,
every word that one could say.

But I'm not that "every guy",
I'm not one and the same,
I'm one in a million,

I know you're sitting there asking yourself why?

Why should I believe you?
Why should I trust you with MY heart?
But you've seen the same, real me from the start.
I haven't changed one bit.

And well I'm here with love and caring,
now all you have to do is love me back,
oh yeah and stop staring.
©2004-2009 ~Dragonspear
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Submitted: December 15, 2004
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I wrote this in inspiration to a few nights ago, something I said to a friend of mine
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=Joyblack007:iconJoyblack007: Dec 15, 2004, 1:20:01 PM
The frost element is very nice...adds a kind of coldness to the poem...no pun intended (I think). Good job.

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~Dragonspear:iconDragonspear: Dec 15, 2004, 1:30:22 PM
Thank you, is that all? lol, you seem a bit held back, lol

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Throughout life you realize that things aren't all they're cracked up to be.
Life's hard enough, don't make it harder than it has to be.
One's true meaning can only be deciphered within their Creator's eyes.

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~ZacharyKane:iconZacharyKane: Dec 15, 2004, 1:35:23 PM
A little bit of inspiration from the change in seasons here =) ? Good work with this one, using the cold as a metaphor throughout helps out with the emotions of the poem tremendously
~Dragonspear:iconDragonspear: Dec 15, 2004, 2:04:59 PM
Thank you sir! I appreciate your input! Yay! for me!, LOL

thanks man you're much appreciated

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Throughout life you realize that things aren't all they're cracked up to be.
Life's hard enough, don't make it harder than it has to be.
One's true meaning can only be deciphered within their Creator's eyes.

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~suicideispainless:iconsuicideispainless: Dec 15, 2004, 4:10:26 PM
i love the frost element! it seems a bit controversial to the love side.......i think! :clap:

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~Dragonspear:iconDragonspear: Dec 15, 2004, 4:28:38 PM
But its essential to the love side right??

And I wrote it inspired by the saying Cold hands warm heart. Cause I do have cold hands and a warm heart, figuratively AND literally ;P

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Throughout life you realize that things aren't all they're cracked up to be.
Life's hard enough, don't make it harder than it has to be.
One's true meaning can only be deciphered within their Creator's eyes.

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~nolight:iconnolight: Dec 15, 2004, 6:16:07 PM
awe it's beautiful, good work!

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~poetika:iconpoetika: Dec 15, 2004, 7:27:10 PM
I like the concept you seem to be very heart pouring lately but its your flow i fell in love with ,the smooth transitions you make and i love how you ended it, a vage end would have ruined the poem.
You stated your feelings clearly you make the follow up and you end it not final but solid. It may be inappropriate of me to say (especially since youre older than me lol) but im proud of you, as a writer, this is one of your few brilliant, perfectly structured poems.

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~darkheartedsiren:icondarkheartedsiren: Dec 15, 2004, 7:32:02 PM
i know your secret...lol this is so sweet she is very lucky to have someone like you....now can i clone you ?

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i'm off to tackle the world and paint it RED!!!!


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